Speed boats are better then Helicopters.

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.

Success Criteria:

1. I plan for a writing task
2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
5. I use capital letters, fullstops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
6. Use persuasive language

Speed boats are better than helicopters

In my opinion I believe that speed boats are better than helicopters  

The cool thing about speed boats is there speed can go between 160 and 170 mph. If you put nitro in it you can go up to 205 mph, if you have 10 packs of nitro you can to 500 mph but you have to have 2 engines in the front and 2 at the back. There is another kind of speed boat called Jet boats.  Jet boats are a type of racing boats and speedboats are fishing and racing boats.

The thing about helicopters is that they are more expensive, helicopters are about $80,000 and speed boats are about $20,000 or $10,000. Helicopters are more dangerous, for example if you jump or put your hand in the air it could get chopped off.

On speed boats you don't hear the annoying sound when you go on a helicopter, unlike speed boats they don’t make noise.

Therefore I strongly believe that speed boats are better than helicopters.  

Pets should be allowed in School - Term 3 Week 4

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.

Success Criteria:

1. I plan for a writing task
2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
5. I use capital letters, fullstops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
6. Use persuasive language

Pets should be allowed in school.

I strongly believe that pets should be allowed in schools

You would agree cats are fluffy & you could sleep with them if you're tired.  If you have no friends you can play with the pets at school. Another reason is dogs can help you if are blind and they can help you to get things like pens & pencils.  Another point is they can protect you from danger and if you are cold they can warm you up.  If there's any robbers they scare them away.

You could train dogs, cats and birds to dance and you could do P.E with the dogs.  You can also train the pets to do tricks like flips and talking. You can also play tag or same thing like that and they could be in.

Pets are playful, so you could play with them heaps and heaps and heaps until they or you get tired.  When you are bored, pets can cheer you up.  When you haven't given in your homework you could say the dog ate it and the dog will do a little cutie face and your teacher will go awwwwwww.

Therefore I believe that pets should be allowed at school.