Sunday, August 16, 2015

Pets should be allowed in School - Term 3 Week 4

WALT persuade other students to agree with our opinion.  This the purpose for my writing.
Success Criteria:
  1. I plan for a writing task
  2. I write a variety of sentence lengths with different sentence starters
  3. Give reasons with detail - use specific words
  4. I write most topic and high frequency words correctly.
  5. I use capital letters, fullstops, question marks and exclamation marks correctly.
  6. Use persuasive language

Pets should be allowed in school.

I strongly believe that pets should be allowed in schools

You would agree cats are fluffy & you could sleep with them if you're tired.  If you have no friends you can play with the pets at school. Another reason is dogs can help you if are blind and they can help you to get things like pens & pencils.  Another point is they can protect you from danger and if you are cold they can warm you up.  If there's any robbers they scare them away.

You could train dogs, cats and birds to dance and you could do P.E with the dogs.  You can also train the pets to do tricks like flips and talking. You can also play tag or same thing like that and they could be in.

Pets are playful, so you could play with them heaps and heaps and heaps until they or you get tired.  When you are bored, pets can cheer you up.  When you haven't given in your homework you could say the dog ate it and the dog will do a little cutie face and your teacher will go awwwwwww.

Therefore I believe that pets should be allowed at school.




  1. Cool, Jaden! Star: I really liked the part when you said you could give an ecxuse and say that your dog ate your homework! Star: It all makes sense and is really true. Wish: Next time, remember that playtime does not go on forever and you can not play until you are tired either. but pets are very playful!

  2. I agree with you Jaden I like the way you said When you haven't given in your homework you could say the dog ate. it that is so funny. Nice work, : )